Thank You to the Woman on the Subway
Prompt: Heroism comes in many forms. Running towards certain death
to have a sliver of a chance to save a life, offering nourishment to the
starved, giving console to those who need it. Acts of heroism come in many
forms, for many people, at many levels of grandeur. Write a heroic act or tale.
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Rachel wrapped her scarf around her neck a little more
snugly to ward off the morning chill. The L platform was dotted with figures
similarly bundled up against the cold, clutching briefcases and backpacks and
to-go cups. A breeze ruffled her hair, pushing strands from one side of her
part to the other. She pulled off a glove and raked the strands back into
place.
“It looks nice like that,” someone said.
Rachel turned her head at the voice without thinking. A man
stood a few steps away, smiling at her above his own scarf.
“Oh. Uh. Thanks,” Rachel replied.
She returned her attention to the tracks. The train was
approaching.
“Heading downtown?” the man asked as the train slid into the
platform.
“Yup.”
“Me, too.”
“Mm.”
Rachel felt a little bit of uneasiness rise. She didn’t like
talking to anyone in the morning, not even her roommates. Most days, she didn’t
say a single word before she arrived at the office. The doors opened, and a few
people exited the train around the puddle of commuters waiting to get on. Rachel
tried to insert herself into the middle of the puddle, hoping the man would
leave her alone. When she got on, though, the man followed her.
“Are you a secretary?” he asked as she headed toward an
empty seat.
“No.” She changed directions, looking for a way out of this
conversation. None of the other passengers moved or made eye contact with her
as the doors closed. Maybe she should’ve gotten off the train?
“Well, hey, don’t be unfriendly. I’m just trying to get to
know you,” the man insisted, his face folding into a scowl.
“I’m not –” Rachel started, her heartbeat picking up.
“Can’t even give me the time of day,” he went on, continuing
to step closer to her. “What’s the matter? You gay? You got some limp-dick
boyfriend at home? Well, let me tell you –”
“Michelle! Oh my gosh, Michelle, is that you?” a woman’s
voice cut in.
Once again, Rachel turned to look, a bubble of hope rising
in her chest. A woman rose from her seat a few feet away and stepped toward
them, reaching out to put a hand on Rachel’s shoulder.
“Oh my gosh, it’s so good to see you again!” the woman went
on. She gave Rachel a nearly-imperceptible wink, and Rachel got the hint.
“You too,” Rachel replied, adopting the woman’s tone of
excitement. “How’s life treating you?”
“Oh, same old, same old,” the woman laughed. As she talked,
she slowly inched herself between the man and Rachel. “Missing my mom, you know
how it is. But life goes on, right?”
Over the woman’s shoulder, Rachel saw the man slink away,
curling himself around a pole by the door. They kept on talking, not really
saying anything but never letting the conversation die. As the train pulled
into Rachel’s stop, she glanced toward the door again and realized that the man
was gone.
“Thank you,” Rachel said to the woman. “I don’t know what I
would’ve done if you hadn’t…”
“Don’t worry about it,” the woman replied. “I couldn’t let a
sister get harassed like that and not step in.” She held out a hand as the
train slowed to a stop. “Cindy.”
“Rachel.”
“Well, you have a good day, Rachel. Don’t let the bastards
get you down.”
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